Jay Quisitive
Aug 29, 2022

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Solid and engaging writing, Madison! Claps and encouragement. I especially loved the paragraph highlighting the importance of your personal network. I mentor younger co-workers in my role and I emphasize the value of that constantly.

I personally got a little lost in the story about Betty. I understood the picture of her challenges, but not how she didn't quit quietly, or the significance of her decision to "stay in her lane" to the story. I hope that comes across as gentle feedback from a well-wisher. Though maybe you are planning a Part 2 and this was just leaving a reader wanting more (though I would spell that out if so)?

Anyway, thanks for considering the feedback. I hope to hear more of your voice on Medium!

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Jay Quisitive
Jay Quisitive

Written by Jay Quisitive

Musing and writing about sexuality and ethics. I think I made $8.75 last year from Medium. I’m not here for the money. I’m here to explore and engage.

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